Well i tried to make this scene much more darker as i will be needing some time to work on the next few scenes. Be sure to post comments in the comments section. Constructive criticism is welcome :)
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Scene 6
A horn blared loudly. Prime smiled “I don’t!” A Car Carrier Truck was moving up the road. It sped up and skidded as its cars flew off hitting Thundercracker and barely missing a teleporting Skywarp. Starscream sliced out as the truck transformed revealing Ultra Magnus. He spun round and sliced at Starscream who deflected but soon found himself under the edge of the blade.
“You may have won this fight Autobots but I will return” Starscream yelled as he flew upwards and out of sight. Thundercracker followed with Skywarp teleporting away behind them. Ultra Magnus turned and looked at Optimus. “Now Optimus Prime there is some grave news we have to discuss” Optimus nodded even though he was not prepared for what Ultra Magnus had to say.
“We`re leaving Earth” Ultra Magnus said. Prime looked shocked “We swore to protect the humans after our war came to this planet, the Decepticons are still out there” Ultra Magnus turned slightly as Ratchet repaired Blurr`s leg. “That is why I am your replacement!”
“My replacement?” Prime stammered. Ultra Magnus nodded. “It is the opinion of the Autobot Resistance council that you are not fit to lead. Therefore you must be removed from active duty as commander of the Autobots” Magnus replied. “You’re a good Leader Prime but you can’t stop them all, not here” Magnus continued. “So your answer is to run and let this planet fend for itself against an enemy it cannot possibly defeat?” Optimus asked. “We will give them a fighting a chance. If we are far away we can remove some of the fire from earth and its inhabitance”
Prime turned away, looking down. “When is this effective” he asked. “The Council finished deliberating a few days ago. Its effective immediately” Magnus replied, Prime nodded. “So be it” Ultra Magnus turned “I will inform the rest of the Autobots” Ultra Magnus said as he strode off towards them.
Nemesis cargo bay, Mars. “I have returned Megatron. It was like you said. Starscream is plotting against you” Astrotrain said as he landed in his Space shuttle form. “He is tough but not smart enough to be worried about. His arrogance will be the end of him. He is of no concern. Did you bring them?” Astrotrain nodded in reply. He transformed and the Constructicons filled out slowly as the gas swirled around and inside them. “They still need a spark though otherwise they are useless acting alone” Astrotrain said. Megatron smiled “I can arrange something like that”
Autobot Base, Location Classified. “So who is this guy, Prime?” Ironhide asked as he walked through the gantry next to Optimus. “He is Ultra Magnus. Leader of the Autobot Resistance” Prime said. “I thought we were the resistance?” Ironhide replied. They walked turned a corner and walked into a passageway constructed with rocks made from solid Iron.
“Ratchet pass the Ion defibrillator, Mind those cables” Wheeljack said as he spun round and grabbed a Screw Driver and began working on a small round object held by several cables above Wheelies body. The object glowed a light blue. “How`s he doing” Prime asked. “I`m fine” Wheeljack replied. “I meant how is your patient” Prime sighed.
“Oh him” Wheeljack said. Blurr shot past and stood to attention in the corner as Ultra Magnus came into the room. “He`s dead. But don’t worry. Why don’t you all gather round?” Wheeljack sighed. Prime looked down sadly. “Now let us begin” Wheeljack said. Ratchet attatched several cables and the object hummed into life. The blue light glowed brighter and brighter as it engulfed the Autobots corpse.
Then as quickly as it had appeared it faded away. Nothing. “Just wait, wait” Wheeljack said as he looked over to the monitor. The monitor flashed up and a single line pulsed up and down. “He`s alive” Ultra Magnus exclaimed as he rushed over to a gasping Wheelie. “In my day that would have been considered an act of fate” Kup said as he stood at the door. “It is my friend. It is” Prowl said placing a hand on Kups shoulder.
“What happened?” Wheelie said with alarm surrounded by the other Autobots. “I was after this huge thing then everything went blank” He shrugged. Optimus looked at Wheeljack sternly “What is this thing?” He asked. Wheeljack shrugged “After fixing Ratchet I manage to attach a few left over pieces radiation with a few human devices. Quite easy to work it just siphons nearby energy and uses it to power the machine”
“I want it destroyed” Optimus said. The rest of the Autobots looked at Optimus. “This machine could help us win this war Optimus” Ultra Magnus said. “Yeah without it we are all going to die. What happens then? We stay dead!” Blurr said. “It’s too dangerous to use this machine if the Decepticons gained control of it then this war would be over” As if to answer Optimus`s fears the roof above him exploded.
Even under the surveillance and protection of N.E.S.T. and the Autobots it seemed it still wasn’t safe anywhere on Earth. The explosion sent the roof collapsing in a violent quake as Astrotrain and Shockwave landed. Shockwave tore open the roof. Prime managed to stand up and quickly grabbed the circular object. “You will not lay your hands on this today Decepticons” Optimus said as the Decepticons moved forward.
“Foolish Autobot, Why do we need the creation when we can have its creator?” Shockwave fired and sent Optimus flying backwards the object flew out of his hand. Astrotrain crushed it into the ground. Ratchet moaned. His arm, only just repaired from the last battle, lay crushed under the rubble. Shockwave looked around.
“You two are coming with us” Shockwave said as he and Astrotrain moved through the rubble. Astrotrain picked up both Ratchet and Wheeljack. “You lose Autobots, the end has come” Shockwave yelled. Astrotrain fired his boosters as his robot mode slowly lifted higher.
“Not today Decepticons” Ultra Magnus said lifting off the collapsed roof he had been under. He jumped grabbing onto Astrotrains leg and clawing his way up. Shockwave spotted him and fired sending the Autobots new leader collapsing to the ground below as Shockwave and Astrotrain jetted off into the air!
Tuesday, 7 July 2009
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11 comments:
pritty good, althouh can you tell me what are some of the new autobot and decepticons alt. modes? And will Sideswipe and Jolt or Skids and Mudflap be featued in this adaption? Whats happening to me is what happened in RoTF, how skids and Mudflap kind of stole the spotlight off of Ironhide and Ratchet, as in this one with the newer autobots, its taking robots from the RoTF's place
Oh and i had an idea that if you like you could use in your adaption with Jolt.
May contain Spoilers if yused in the Adaption!!
Since Jolt has electric whips ( or what ever they are), i was thinking that mabye at the final battle, Skywarp injured Sideswipe badly while he was fighting with jolt so he teloports and kicks jolt over, so Jolt whips out his electric whips, and grabs Skywarp as hes trying to teloportand and shove his electricity right into his chest killing Skywarp.
When are there going to be scenes of the human characters? I do agree that this is called TRANSFORMERS but the modern human life style twistd with the cartoon is what made it even better. Sam's parents really crack me up. It's kinda funny to see an older woman yell at Soundwave over the phone for his "perverted mouthbreathing". It's awesome how Revenge of the Fallen is the top grossing film worldwide of 2009! I have to see it atleast two ore three more times and get the DVD! This film really was just amazing! I'm wondering why people are giving the film terrible reviews though. I mean, most people hate this film cuz they've either never seen or heard of the cartoon before, they've never read the comments, they're too old and can't enjoy a simple action sequence involving Optimus kicking the asses of three decepticons, or they don't realize how hot Megan Fox is. If anyone above 18 that isn't gay and isn't married hates the film cuz the last one then they're just plain evil. Geez the things I'd do to get that girl. Anyways, it shows how dumb America really is when it comes to taste in movies. People are also pissed that Sam went to "robot heaven' when he supposedly "died'. For the last time, Sam wasn't dead! He was just severely knocked out and probably was either suffering from a coma or his heart stopping. As for robot heaven thing, it was a vision! Plus, the primes were probably so powerfu that beign dead they could still regenerate the Matrix of Leadership! On a ratigng scale from 1 to 10....I give it a 12.
Replying to RY:
The rest of the Autobots are going to be reappearing in some of the later scene along with Bumblebee in scene 7. Sideswipe has already been introduced but yes he will continue to feature in the coming chapters. The twins are currently looking for more Seekers and will be returning later. Jolt is currently Jolt is with Bumblebee however he will most likely appear in scene 7 aswell.
I like your idea for the Jolt scene i might use it later. If i do you will get the credit for the idea :)
Replying to KirkH:
There has already been a bit of Human scenes however they will have larger parts soon.
Thanks :-)
Its alright :)
So any idea for when scene 7 will be up?
Either Saturday or Sunday. I just have a bit left to finish and complete.
Okay thanks for telling me. :-)
Its okay :)
Hope you enjoy it. It will be dark!
Scene 7 coming on Sunday
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